Wednesday, April 10, 2019

Writing - dictated and edited by adding adjectives

Tilden is working hard on graduating to more interesting writing - more adjectives.  We've also pulled back on electronics and pushed more colorful, action-based drawing every day.  He's reluctant and needing more inspiration.  Hoping more sun soon will open up those inspirational pathways.  Also asking him to read more poetry when he's done with the latest Harry Potter novel.

From: Tilden Guttenberger <tilguttenberger@icloud.com>
Date: April 10, 2019 at 8:26:12 AM PDT
To: Tyler Guttenberger <tyguttenberger@gmail.com>
Subject: Hhhhhdddghjhrsfgcsygccgjvfvjggfcvbjgxvvhsyjdrgusigouhffggrfgoie

There was a loving and kind boy. He loved to draw. Especially funny dinosaurs, terrifying dragons, weird people and cool comics. He was only five years old so he wasn't that impressive. He had one annoying brother, two wacko sisters and a Busy mother and a favorited father. Their names were Peter (the favorited dad.) Tom (the annoying brother.) Cindy (one of the wacko sisters.) Jenelle (the other silly sister.) Abby (the Busy mom.) Then Bob (the boy.) One day while Cindy, Jenelle and Abby were cooking crazily  The boys were barbecuing and playing games, because it was their grandma's birthday and she loved barbecue Beef and baked cookies.

-Tilden

TILDEN GUTTENBERGER
(sent from my iphone)

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